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    Inclined to feel
               Something amiss from the world around
        So many little ideas from a sunrise
                     Too many to count in this depressed array of sunshine
    The blood staind dreams approved through the past
                                           Cold candy by the parking meter
            Can't you see through the skin tight clothes
                                 
                     The leather surroundings make the air so dry
            A timid approach in the eyes of a victor
                                 Temptation
   A statistic to the world of rape
                                                                     And you didn't think it would be you.
:icondarktribute:
My poem for this months theme for [link] enjoy
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:icondeviantnachtengel:
your poems facinate me
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:iconbysayingdada:
yay!! powerful; i like :)
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~acid-delilah Jun 24, 2005  Hobbyist Writer
wow, heavy

but i do love to the point of adoraton

:glomp:ing perfect
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~Graawwr Jun 23, 2005   Writer
Hmm. Seems different then your normal stuff (which is very refreshing to say the least) and it seems like the whole poem makes sense with itself (not jumping all over)

A+ improvement and very good to boot.
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:icondarktribute:
Damn, I thought you wouldn't notice =)
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